Blog # 10 last post



Hello~everyone! This is last blog essay!

so sad~ when I took this class at first time, I don't know how I can write a good essay.

Owing to this class and  professor, I got so many things that I can write a good shape essay.

For example, I can make a good cover letter. so if I have a chance to apply for foreigner company, I am sure that I will be success.

Nowadays many job seekers want to work at foreigner company. I think that essay skills are very important to do it. So I really recoommend that you who want to work at foreigner company take a essay class.

Even my English essay 1 class will be finished. I will continue English essay study.
Thanks to everyone and everything.
I will be missing english essay 1class.

Blog # 9 smmary and citations( 2 tourists killed, dozens injured in bus accident)

A torust bus was drailed from a road at Nam Hae germany villege, South Korea on June 5. The reason why bus was drailed is that bus was bumped against three cars. Because of this accident, two people killed and other 44 people was injured. Police thought that the bus accident might have been caused as the bus's brake system didn't work well.(Korea herald)

Nowadays, these accidents frequently happend. Frankly, one of the my relatives was hurt from similar accident.  At that time, he was broken arm because bus's brake didn't work. My realatives accident and this accident is very silmilar baceuse of break. So I think bus driver and agency was careless about part of automobile. If they check part of automobile. We couldn't meet this trouble. I think time to check some part of automobile is taking very short. Today, also many people take bus to go contry or go to travel. So bus drivers and agecy need caution about break. Many drivers already know about important of check part of automobile. But they usually ignore it.  So some policy about bus need to add some law in order to should not happen again.

"2 tourists killed, dozens injured in bus accident."  Korea Herald. 5 June. 2011. 5 June. 2011. < http://www.koreaherald.com/national/Detail.jsp?newsMLId=20110605000199 >

Blog # 8_ I phone 4 and Galaxy S2

              There are so many similar between I phone 4 and Galaxy S2. Both of them are smart phone. Also, they have so many potential customer who want to wait a brand new version. So I phone 4 and Galaxy S2 are always hot issue over all the world.
              However, they have many different function. In spite of the similar things, they offer different skill to customer. First, I phone 4 need a encoded skill to see some vedio. Because I phone 4 was maded by American who don't hate do that. But most of the Korean don't like that way. That's why Galaxy S2 offer a skill which doesn't need to do.
               In conclusion, I really hate edcoded so Galaxy S2 is more suitable for me. But I phone which has more fasionable design is good for using so may application.

Blog # 7 _New York and Seoul

          New York and Seoul have very similar as well as different about  culture and food. First, I am going to talk about culture. Both of them have similar culture, especially on night culture. Seoul and New York are very popular among the traveler as a never sleep city. However, New York is very open mind city unlike Seoul which has a  somewhat close mind. Second, I am going to talk about food. The same thing between New York and Seoul is that organic food is very popular.  Many people who live in New York and Seoul always think about their health. So, Both city are well developed at puctional food or organic food. But Thre are diffrent thing for food between them.  On the one hand, a person who lives in New York usually eat some bread, cereal for their breakfast. On the other hand, rice give a power to a person who lives in Seoul.
          These are the two cities I love. In my case, becaouse I like a bread and cereal, New York is more suitable for me. But I think sometimes I need  close mind and rice for my dinner.

Blog # 6 Age at marriage

Now a days, we are faced with difficulties of marry. If you want to marry now, you prepare to buy home which is very expensive. Also you have a burden about childcare expenses. So many marriageable age people have much stress. So they decide to marry later to prepare so many thing specially money. However, some people worried about last long. They think that problem will dinimish population.
Even though each gvernment always effort to improve this problem, this situation continue so long time. so marriageable age people have to decide to marry later than now.

Blog # 5 Decline marry at early age

Can you imagine that there no people in the world?
Now a days so many people want to marry at older age than now. Age at marrige has been risen from about 10 years ago. Even chinese. Statistics reported in a newspaper showed that The age at which people in Shanghai choose to marry has continued to rise in recent years. The city’s annual marriage situation report showed that locals’ average marriage age was 32.45 for men and 29.77 for women last year, 0.4 years older than that of 2009. If this situation hold out so long time, it makes troble in the world.

Blog # 4 * A hippo, jessica

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When I saw this vedio, I was surprised! Although I had expected it, I was very frightened. I always think a hippo is a very dangerous animal. I can't imagine this situation. Before I saw this, I had waited a special hippo. afterword, I found that hippo live as people. After I saw entirely this video, I was finding the other fun video.

 

This vedio makes me smile. I think this relieve my feeling received from a hippo vedio. I wanna get a penguin like that.