Blog # 10 last post



Hello~everyone! This is last blog essay!

so sad~ when I took this class at first time, I don't know how I can write a good essay.

Owing to this class and  professor, I got so many things that I can write a good shape essay.

For example, I can make a good cover letter. so if I have a chance to apply for foreigner company, I am sure that I will be success.

Nowadays many job seekers want to work at foreigner company. I think that essay skills are very important to do it. So I really recoommend that you who want to work at foreigner company take a essay class.

Even my English essay 1 class will be finished. I will continue English essay study.
Thanks to everyone and everything.
I will be missing english essay 1class.

Blog # 9 smmary and citations( 2 tourists killed, dozens injured in bus accident)

A torust bus was drailed from a road at Nam Hae germany villege, South Korea on June 5. The reason why bus was drailed is that bus was bumped against three cars. Because of this accident, two people killed and other 44 people was injured. Police thought that the bus accident might have been caused as the bus's brake system didn't work well.(Korea herald)

Nowadays, these accidents frequently happend. Frankly, one of the my relatives was hurt from similar accident.  At that time, he was broken arm because bus's brake didn't work. My realatives accident and this accident is very silmilar baceuse of break. So I think bus driver and agency was careless about part of automobile. If they check part of automobile. We couldn't meet this trouble. I think time to check some part of automobile is taking very short. Today, also many people take bus to go contry or go to travel. So bus drivers and agecy need caution about break. Many drivers already know about important of check part of automobile. But they usually ignore it.  So some policy about bus need to add some law in order to should not happen again.

"2 tourists killed, dozens injured in bus accident."  Korea Herald. 5 June. 2011. 5 June. 2011. < http://www.koreaherald.com/national/Detail.jsp?newsMLId=20110605000199 >